Wednesday, December 2, 2015

First Winter Snow

by Catfish McDaris

Birch trees full of black
feathered blue headed grackles
dancing on the wind

Fluttering up down
naked snowy ice branches
all flakes different

Blowing cold smoke rings
my shovel resting awhile
kids make snow angels.

8 comments:

  1. very nice images best wishes angelee

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  2. very nice images best wishes angelee

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  3. Yes, this sequence really shows your range, Catfish. Great poem!

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  4. Hi Catfish,
    I really enjoyed the way this flows. Your images are terrific.

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  5. Lovely poem for its natural imagery and innocent discovery of language and life.

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  6. Lovely poem for its natural imagery and innocent discovery of language and life.

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