Sunday, November 26, 2017

Lines

by Charles Gramlich

Against a backdrop of rain-gray gulls take sunlit wing

6 comments:

  1. Remarkable imagery and mood in a single line of poetry. Well done.

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  2. Love the rain-gray. It can go with either part.

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  3. "sunlit wing"...these two words together are a clever choice, conveying strong imagery, alliteration...nice!

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  4. Thanks, everyone. I appreciate the kind words!

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